I know I haven't been here the longest so many of you do not know that I also in my spare time like to practice my music production.
Here is a little something I have been working on the past couple days.
Pretty nice man! I'm about as big a Dubstep and Drum&Bass junky as it gets lol! Few pointers...not trying to criticize just giving an opinion.
Your intro is quite nice. You've got a good sound effect going on the background and unique kick & snare pattern on the foreground...I like it. One thing you could add to your intro is some high hats to kick up the tempo, and modulated bass tones before the drop.
Your timing at the end is perfect, and ready for the drop. That's where it's at and will determine if people will follow you IMO. Make it dirty lol! Doing great though man. Keep it up!
Some of my favs:
Beat down sections!
Sub bass tones on drops
Dropped levels for second verse/drop